Myfavorite英语作文 英语作文范文:My,favorite,animals
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I like animals very much. Ilike. pandas, tigers and koalas.I like pandas, tigers and koalas.
I like pandas. Because,because they are cute,and they are only from China. So, I like them .I just can"t help loving them.
I like tigers. Beause ,because they are scary, but strong SoIlike them, too.the king of the forest.Their strength and speed are really impressive.
And I like koalas, they aren"t from China, but, I also like them, because they are very smart and interesting and it bring us a lot of laughter.
I think(am sure) everyone(many other people) also like them. So animals are very valuable.They are our best friends and we should cherish them.
文章结构较为清晰,但是内容不够充实,对于逻辑连词的使用还有待提高。一方面要增加日常的阅读量,丰富自己的表达方式;另一方面多写多练,不断提高。
