英语作文范文：my,new,friend:myfriend英语作文

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Hu Yue is my new friend，In our class, she likes singing and she can sing very well.

She"s 1.60meters tall. she has blank hair and wears school uniform.She is very lovely and pretty. She likes eating hamburger, vegetable and peanuts and dislikes fishesfish, green tea and sweets,She also loves listening to music,reading and writing. Her favorite hobby is drawing. because she likes all the different colors,She is really great!

点评：本文基本没有语法错误，但是篇幅太短，信息传递不够全面，同时没有出彩的短语结构，可以在这几方面再进行提升。

1) 写此类主题的作文可以不用分段

2）如能善用连接词会更好，比如在描写兴趣爱好的时候可以用“…but……”“not only…but also…”等等